burning

To begin analyzing this piece a few thing must be noted, for instance the impasto of the medium used and the representation of your original work. The lighting of the photo itself suggests a photo-like quality to the image we are critiquing that cannot and should not be ignored. To do this would be to ignore the way light interacts with the surface of your work. As for the piece itself, it piece lacks originality. This is not in itself a failure. It mirrors abstract expressionism and certainly thrives in this context.
The placement of texture is dynamic in calling attention to the bottom right corner which unfortunately lacks the focus of the camera in combination with the lack of contrast in the corner. This area seems a little too indefinite to hold attention and should be the strongest part of your piece according to the implied movement of the rest of the image. The movement in the work, is imbued with energy yet a calming gentleness the the white, almost cloud-like forms. Meanwhile the colors utilized, coupled with their interactions stand perfectly by themselves and are generally interesting. In all I'd say its a good piece and could possibly use a little more development in the bottom right. A better picture to be taken of it to display its beauty better would also be a suggestion.